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:iconchadf:
I like the style and the cuts that you've chosen. And I really dig the complementary green and red color scheme. Really adds tension to the scene!

My only critique would be to consistently carry that color scheme through the whole page. Panels 2, 3 and 5 look like they are a flashback or a completely different fight. It's not as obvious in panel 2 because there is just a little bit of local color in there (his face and the orange of his outfit) but the other 2 panels really took me out of the fight.

Based on the way that the camera is moving, he should be almost all red in panel 2 (with a green rim light), suit guy should be red and sword guy mostly red (with a green rim light) in panel 3 and the background changed to a more dynamic color from the page (streaks of green if the figures are red) and then just changing the local color in panel 5 to red.

I think that would add a lot of cohesion to the pages. Nice work!
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shiprock Featured By Owner Edited Jul 4, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank for compliment and information Chad Fidler :)
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chadf Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
My pleasure. Nice work!!
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